Was surfing, came across this article, then this web site. Homepage asked for crits, I came prepared.
Here is a link to the Pong landing page (you’ll see) and the actual game of Pong.
Here is my (slightly edited) letter.
Why not. I appreciate crits too, hopefully you take mine for whatever they are.
All in the spirit of love, as I saw some of your guys’ work, and love it. (Specifically Crop Hair Boutique from Design Work Life).
In my opinion:
3 column layout on the web is too much. I’ve never seen a 3 column layout that was working as well as it should (Apple Store, Amazon, all of them could be better if they only had 2 columns IMO)..
Two sidebars means there isn’t a good editor to rip out the content you don’t need.
Enter the content mantras: less is more, clutter is the enemy.
If the average user spends seconds on any given page, this is not telling me anything about you in that amount of time. Showcase sexy work that I get at a glance, big type, lots o hierarchy, something cool, more concentrated area of focus.
Beefy margins and the stark nature of the home page create a lot of visual tension, and only one area to focus on (the radio video), which doesn’t have anything to say off the bat.
A lot o fuzzy and pixelated images.
- Every image on the homepage looks fuzzy.
- Grass bg on Our story is pixelated and a little fuzzy, as well as the image on the top
- All logos on Case Studies are fuzzy. These could all be PNG8s, there’s no good reason for these to be fuzzy
- There are probably more but I’ll leave it at that
The Work gallery is nice. Arrows on project page could be more obvious, as well as the buttons in the top right. All of the white space and small buttons make for important elements that I have to look for, instead of them being obvious.
Also, about the Work gallery, the initial page with the thumbnails, I think it needs to be proportionately more image heavy in the view. The text size is fine, but the thumbs should be bigger, and more eye-grabbing.
How to get a job is cool. Feels like it should be a blog though, and not a part of your professional “we want clients” site
Love the Job Openings clip look. Simple, witty and purty.
Under Fun, there’s only one item in that menu, why have a drop down menu for it? Just put Pong in the top menu
A Simple Use Case: The Journey to the Almighty Pong
On the Pong Landing Page
- Love the animation on the page, but it is a little distracting if you actually wanted me to read that text.
- Secondly, I don’t want to read that text. I was promised sweet sweet pong. The four paragraphs of text here is not a well used opportunity for branding, it’s an extra click and will likely never be read.
- “Play now” should be bigger and or more obvious
- The animation should be clickable
- My final point on this page, why does this page exist? Why doesn’t the Pong link in the menu take me directly to Pong?
The actual Pong
- Tooooo small!! Why isn’t it 100% by 100% and keep the scale mode proportional (don’t remember the actual parameter or value)
- ALL of the buttons on the opening Pong page are TERRIBLE. I have to click the stroke of the type that makes up the button. Let me repeat, the stroke of the type is the hit area.
- When I can hover over the play click area and play, I would expect that my mouse would disappear and i’d instantly be controlling the paddle no matter where my mouse was or what the state of the buttons are (nothing, hover, click, release)On second thought, click (anywhere since the mouse is invisible) could be pause.A simple listener and the smallest bit of math can make this happen. If you want it even sexier, the paddle could have a bit of a delay on it, rub on a polynomial equation of funk for this effect.
I feel robbed of the sweet promise of pong.
That’s it.
Again, love your work, hope you don’t think I’m trying to be a dick, congrats on the new site, and the awesome work
- Wes





This is easier said than done. Getting writers to write in a common voice is a tricky thing. Several companies I’ve worked for have had extensive voice guideline documents. These guidelines attempted to lay out as many examples as possible for spelling, words to use, phrases to avoid and other tips and tricks for adhering to the brand voice. But in the end, these guidelines are more like a laundry list than a training manual. It’s hard to glean the gestalt (academic alliteration FTW!) from the individual parts.

